Under my feet I can see lots of leaves.
Trees are big trees are old. Trees are bright and colourful.
Under my feet i can see the bright colourful leaves.
March the 1th is when it is autumn.
Near me is a tree with beautiful leaves.
Monday 16 March 2020
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Good job Tala'ofa, I like the way you used the autumn facts into your Acrostic poem. Keep up your hard work.
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Kia ora Talaofa, what a lovely poem you have written about autumn. I like the desctriptive words you have used. Can I suggest you try and tell your readers about how you feel if you were standing outside during autumn?
ReplyDeleteyour autumn poem is the best
ReplyDeleteyour Autumn poem it great and i like the adjectives that you used!
ReplyDelete-Uinita